Reviews for Insomnia
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Wow, such a relatable topic. I'm not like this myself, but my boyfriend is, to the point that he often can't fall asleep at all. I like how I was able to connect to this so easily.

I also like the distinct pulse that this has. Your word choice, and also the placement of your line breaks, gives this a nice beat that made it easy to read, even though it's relatively long.

Great descriptions, too. Especially the end. "Together we make such a/Wonderful contradiction." Such a great line :)