Very beautiful story! I read it all at once! And I love that Gemma preferred sunflowers than roses:):) (cos I feel the same way :))

'Stumble' is absolutely one of my favorite stories! ;)

Well done!

This is a cute story, and I like the plot. Honestly I wish that more hints were dropped throughout the story that it was Harvey, that way if someone went back and read it, they probably could have pieced it together. I think that would have made the story more suspenseful and also overall better. Another thing I noticed was that while this story wasn't purely tell, tell, tell and not much showing or describing, for some reason it just didn't have the same effect as other stories where you really feel like you're in there, living the story alongside the characters. I can't figure out why this is but that was just the feeling I got from the story. Like I enjoyed reading it, but nothing about the story just screamed that I needed to find out what happened next and keep reading it.

Overall cute story though. You have some other ones that seem interesting too. As someone who goes to UCLA, your USC/UCLA one is funny too. Anyway, keep up the good work.

- Alyssa

Great story, I really wasn't expecting the culprit to be who he was. Though initially I did find it weird how he tried to discourage Daniel from falling in love. Since technically it would make Daniel more inclined to protect Gemma, which was his main priority and job. However due to Gemma being the Boss' daughter, I dismissed the peculiarity of the dissuasion.

Also, at the beginning, their relationship seemed hot and cold. One moment they'd admit that the other wasn't who they seemed to be, then the next they'd claim hatred towards each others company. Despite the slight confusion, The story is without a doubt a captivating read.

I can honestly relate to the feeling of loss of cartoons like Scooby Doo and such. Though Scooby Doo isn't completely lost, it's not as big as it used to be which is sad. I claim to love cartoons and all but I can't quite enjoy Ben 10 and other newer cartoons.

Entertaining

Thanks for sharing your writtings with us!

I just finish your story and go directly into your profil to read your others!

You should try a editor. Seriously.

Wonderful story! :)

ok, now i'm in love with your sotry. i love sunflowers so.. hahaha

sorry i got excited, it's always been roses so now you mention the sunflowers.. i mean.. hahaha it's a nice change!

and it's my favorite flower too :)

Ohmygosh this is just bout one of the best stories I've ever read.

You are an epic awesomesauceness writer and this story is AMAZING!

Thank you so much for writing!

~Mxya

I ador this story. I read it in 2 days and it warmed my heart.

Hey,

This is soo good.

You have the genes to be a writer keep it up

Oh my gosh, that was so cute!

I thought I wouldn't like this story because it seemed too cliche-y, but I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

((as always))

(:

Keep writing!

~Mo~

Awesomely brilliant :)

Lovely.

Great story. Loved the plot; it wasn't over done. Thanks for sharing.