Let me be frank. The writing isn't dreadful, nor is the premise. But I only had to read the first two chapters to know that this is more suited to being a Daniel Craig fanfic. Maybe that's what ruined it for me - I just couldn't get past the mental image of him in my head.

Regardless, I didn't feel any of the so-called chemistry between your main characters. Their relationship felt flat. There was no fire, no sparks. Sure, you said there were, but there's a difference between telling the reader and showing the reader.

I made it this far hoping I'd feel like this wasn't a weird attempt at a Casino Royale ripoff, but I'm afraid I can't see it improving much. You're not a bad writer. But next time, be a little more original, please. Daniel Craig isn't every girl's idea of handsome.

wow.. I love this story already, even though i have only finished the very first chapter itself! It's fun and easy to read and Gemma is a likable character. I'll certainly finish reading it by today! :D

such a cute story! this definitely cheered me up! i love gemma and daniel together. you're one of my favourite authors now! ;)

holy smokes! i love this story! great job! (i just read the whole thing in like an hour...) haha. ] amazing job.

That was a sweet ending.

I just LOVE this story. Doesn't go to fast, not to slow. Amazing! And I love Gemma. She's so relatable.

M... Snotty family. I don't like em. I hate the mother and the daughter, but I'm getting mixed feelings about the father.

Daniel is being such a prick.

You know, I'm gonna throw subtle hints to my boyfriend to propose to me on a boat filled with Japanese CAMELLIAS during sunset.

AHH cuute!

loovveedd it to little pieces :)

well done

u got me squeeling and laughing in delight !

That was a really sweet story, I really liked it.

"...He pushed the bathroom door open and found Gemma sitting on the floor of the shower, still completely dressed, letting the hot water run over her. Her hair was wet, her dress obviously ruined, but her makeup managed to stay in place. It must be waterproof.

Without a word, Daniel walked into the shower and took a seat next to her. He had never been good at reassuring people, but he knew he wanted to let Gemma know that everything was alright.

It was she who spoke first. "No matter how hot I get the water, I'm still cold," she said in a voice just above a whisper.

Without fully realizing what he was doing, Daniel gently grabbed her wrist and brought her fingers to his lips. He slid the index finger in his mouth before moving on to the middle finger and then to the ring finger. When he finished, he wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her closer to him before resting his head upon hers."

Complete rip off of Casino Royale. Not impressed :/

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY.

YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL GIFT. KEEP UP THE WRITING.

REGARDS

MANDY

This is great!

I wish it wasnt over )):

sequel?

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so cute.

me hearts Daniel and Gemma!

Ri