Reviews for Save the Date |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Do not stop it there! I need to know who gets shot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() its soo good |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant believe that is where you stopped it! really good chapter i hope that daniel is okay i really want them to be together cant wait for the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah honey! Who got shot? Amazing cliffhanger! Dayum! You really got me hanging there! Is Harvey gay? Cuz it sounds like he's jealous of Gemma. Anyways, Great chapter! Love the cliffhanger. Update soon! -CowGirlChick01- |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! You have to update soon! It's like a crime not to! There was a shot! Who was shot? Gemma or Harvey? I hope Harvey... |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT D: ARGH! Anyways... awesome chapter! That was intense XD |
![]() ![]() This is great! I love it! Keep going! It is awesome! More! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT? i bet daniel is shot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, so much drama! I'm anticipating the end when Gemma and Daniel FINALLY admit their feelings for one another ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far and who got shot so please please please please please UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no! i really really REALLY hope its daniel shooting harvey or someone else shooting harvey! agh, the dreaded cliffie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how strong Gemma is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last paragraph gave me chills! Very nice :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice cliffy, I'm very anxious to see what happens. I'm glad she got away and to a cell phone and that he got to her so quickly. I just hope they're both alright. Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, it's cute, amusing, although I think you need to do a little bit of spell and grammar checking, sometimes tenses are backwards and you say he when it should be she, and vice versa, which can be confusing, but not distractingly so, personally, I just fixed it in my head a little. Um... I feel like there is some inconsistency, I don't know if it was on purpose or not, but the way Dan would possibly propose to some one, and how Gem wants to get married are strikingly similar, and, you said that Daniel had never considered getting married, when, in reality, maybe two chapters before you had mentioned that, you said he was considering proposing to Eva. Um... honey, that's considering marriage. Besides those little things, I think this story is amazing, and I'm looking forward to the future chapters, I want to know what's going to happen! Post more, and fairly soon, I think that would be amazing. Loves and Hugs an Rose Petal Blossoms, Avarice |