Reviews for Save the Date
Evanescence's Love chapter 29 . 2/3/2010
Do not stop it there! I need to know who gets shot?
whysgirlfriend chapter 29 . 2/3/2010
its soo good
star95 chapter 29 . 2/3/2010
i cant believe that is where you stopped it!

really good chapter i hope that daniel is okay

i really want them to be together

cant wait for the next one
TwistedCherry chapter 29 . 2/3/2010
Woah honey! Who got shot? Amazing cliffhanger! Dayum! You really got me hanging there! Is Harvey gay? Cuz it sounds like he's jealous of Gemma. Anyways, Great chapter! Love the cliffhanger.

Update soon!

-CowGirlChick01-
to fall or to jump chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
OMG! You have to update soon! It's like a crime not to! There was a shot! Who was shot? Gemma or Harvey? I hope Harvey...
A Paper Airplane chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
NO! YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT D: ARGH! Anyways... awesome chapter! That was intense XD
Court123 chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
This is great!

I love it!

Keep going!

It is awesome!

More!
SNAPE4 chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
WHAT? i bet daniel is shot
Beautiful Destination chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
Oh my gosh, so much drama! I'm anticipating the end when Gemma and Daniel FINALLY admit their feelings for one another ;)
queensarah1 chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
I love the story so far and who got shot so please please please please please UPDATE!
passiononfire chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
oh no! i really really REALLY hope its daniel shooting harvey or someone else shooting harvey! agh, the dreaded cliffie
Hydie chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
I love how strong Gemma is.
AnnalizebethMadrid chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
The last paragraph gave me chills! Very nice :D
Midnight113 chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
Nice cliffy, I'm very anxious to see what happens. I'm glad she got away and to a cell phone and that he got to her so quickly. I just hope they're both alright. Can't wait for the next one!
Alexithimia chapter 29 . 2/2/2010
I like this, it's cute, amusing, although I think you need to do a little bit of spell and grammar checking, sometimes tenses are backwards and you say he when it should be she, and vice versa, which can be confusing, but not distractingly so, personally, I just fixed it in my head a little.

Um... I feel like there is some inconsistency, I don't know if it was on purpose or not, but the way Dan would possibly propose to some one, and how Gem wants to get married are strikingly similar, and, you said that Daniel had never considered getting married, when, in reality, maybe two chapters before you had mentioned that, you said he was considering proposing to Eva. Um... honey, that's considering marriage.

Besides those little things, I think this story is amazing, and I'm looking forward to the future chapters, I want to know what's going to happen! Post more, and fairly soon, I think that would be amazing.

Loves and Hugs an Rose Petal Blossoms,

Avarice
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