Reviews for Save the Date |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I notice that you mentioned sailing and sunflowers a lot yet. They are having a traditional wedding. Are you going to have them have a real small wedding after they confess their love for each other ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good story! I would have titled it Code Blue, but then it would have sounded like an ER story & wouldn't have had so many readers. I see you've written several more stories. Good! I'll check them out. JD Fly |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome read! I loved every single bit of it and cannot complain about anything! I think there were a few typos here and there but I can't get over how much I live it! Stumble's originality and flair really came through in your writing and I simply could not get enough of it! Cheers, TQL |
![]() ![]() ![]() REVIEWING BEFORE I READ! Anyway, I'm really intrigued by your summary. Look forward to whatever lies ahead! Cheers, TQL |
![]() ![]() Oh great story by the wayyy! But I don't really know if his name is Troy or Tony? The football quarterback guy! Last chapter said Tony, but I like the name Troy better! I think Daniel is the one to realize he loves Gemma first! |
![]() ![]() Lady! (I'm just going to call you that instead if your whole penname!) I'm the same from Saving Smiles and I loved that as much as I love this story right now! You are an incredible writer and I always read your story notes before and it's nice to see you ask people how they are and make small talk in an authors note. It is a nice change! And just so you know I saw Joel McHale before I recgonized him when Gemma was saying his name over and over again! I saw him once on Thank God You're Here! I loved his act and Harland Williams! But Joel was very funny with his mummy chant at the end! He is Kinda cute but very very very funny! |
![]() ![]() Oh my god, I squealed. I just squealed. Your story made me squeal. You don't know how much I loathe you right now. I don't squeal. Anyway. That was a really cute story. I kind of want this to happen, but I'm not the daughter of a CIA director. Too bad, eh? All in all, wonderful story. Thank you for writing it, because you're a wonderful writer (save for the few typos :P). |
![]() ![]() OMG I am so excited for you! Congradulations! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, awesome story! It was really cute, and although slightly cliched, it was different enough and well enough written, that that didn't really matter. Besides, I like cliches, as long as they are not too cliche ;) Haha but very well written, and thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAAAYYYY great epilogue, although I wouldve preferred them getting married:D THIS WAS A GREAT STORY LOVED IT. FUNNY. ROMANTIC AND BEAUTIFUL ...GREAT WORK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() after all that and he didn't even tell her he loved her? please please let the epilogue be a sort of happy ever after:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgggshhhhhhh finally some action .. that bastard! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Good God. why didn't she just say it. 'I love you' LOL I just get frustrated sometimes but we shall see when she says it:D love this chapter and I hope that they finally kiss in the next one:) |