Reviews for Stumble
Casslyn chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Casslyn chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
OMG! this is so good! i love it! you need to write more!
Evanescence's Love chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Well...I would have reviewed earlier, but i had school. fun chappie, my new word for chapter...

I feel like watching a movie again, you had to bring up public enemies?

I like it.

The story i mean.

I really got to start giving better feedback. But if i review i liked it. If i review all your chapters i loved it. Not so hard.
Lady R chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Sounds like this will be a fun one! :)
pbgurl chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
LMAO! She punched him! This story seems really interesting!

They are going to have one hell of a time being husbnad and wife.

-Liz :D
MaraSonya chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Wow. I love this story even though I am pretty sure I know a few ways it might end. That's hilarious though that she is twenty and still listening to her parents and running away. She is old enough to move out after all.
Dreamer's Denial chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I absolutely love this! Can't wait for more.
STUVme chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
hmm ...nice ..its intriguing ...go on ..continue like 2 see where it goes !
Nicochic chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
*grin* this looks like such good fun! Love the names Gemma and Daniel (teehee) and the fact that the first 3 paragraphs gave an insight into Gemma's background, parents, etc. Though I love the descriptions, the dialogue is my mega-love! (Made no sense, I know).

I especially loved the last snippet where Gemma's father is discussing the plan of action, and Gemma just lets it all go past her. I think her lack of listening has just landed her into a faux marriage! *grin* And the end - does that mean Dan was the guy Gemma punched?

Though I kind of feel pity for Gemma, I also kinda find it amusing how Brent decides, as quick as a flash, that a marriage would be the best option. Haha. I love it so far, thank you!

P.S. I love Natasha Bedingfield. "I Bruise Easily" is one of my favourite, favourite songs!
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
lovelovelove it

cant wait for more

hope you update soon

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