well his family is crappy! and the shooting and him with that heroic thing he had going on, that was just awesome. and cute. and adorable loved it so much!

well now I want to know what his english family is like! Will they hurry up and kiss already:)

LOL and she is is still mad at him? this was a good chapter to show his jealousy:D

ohhhhhh wow tension much? I thought this was going to be a romantic date. But still its good it very good...

sounds like fun! cake fight lol..well this keeps getting better and better! :D

3 words. he loves her! finally! I just want them to hurry up and be together:D

You know what it's Troy I bet who's after her... and Daniel is jealous thats so cute. and I'm really starting to like. Gillian she is an interesting character...anyways great chapter!

I was thinking she would get kidnapped. But yayy for Daniel coming to the rescue :D loved this chapter!

yessss finally she realises she loves him! I am absolutely in love with this story..whoever is reading this review. READ THE STORY ITS GOOD!

YESSS finally a hint of his feelings are shown...Maybe its Gemmas best friend who sent that letter? oh my gosh I want to know now! this was good keep up the good work

I thought she was 22? she is young but its still a good story I really love it so far. The religion issue, I kinda agree, but oh well everyone is entitled to their opinion. But overall this is just great.

She is funny. I'm just wondering what they would look like? maybe post pictures up? I love this and Daniel is the cuttest. Great work :D

Drew- Drew Barrymore? I think that would fit the description. How cute are Daniel and Gemma I want them to hurry up and fall in love. this is great so far

Love this you are just a-may-zingg!

LOL 'James Bond' I really love Daniel's character I think this is going to be a really good story!