yess this is getting better! cant wait to see how this plans out ...

this is great so far!

I really enjoyed reading your story. It was really cute especially the ending. I look forward to other stories written by you.

Good story but even better writing style

A great read. Just enough action and intrigue to carry the reader through each chapter.

Awwwww... I didn't think that you could have finished it up in a cahpter, but you did!

Disfruté mucho la historia ;)

this is another great story. loved the characters, great progression, love happy endings...love love loved it!

i loved this story well done :)

I'm extremely happy you didn't just make her a damsel in distress. ) Man, she's got some guts-she ain't a helpless little princess. And I'm glad everything worked out for them. You nearly gave me a heart attack in the last chapter. D

Read this the other day but haven't had a chance to review until now. This was amazing! I loved the plotline and thought you did an amazing job with the characters and their interactions! Keep writing! :)

~E.

Ohmygosh, this story had soo much emotions &I loved it. At moments I was cracking &laughing, other moments I was at a verge of crying (well, maaaybe that's sorta exagerrated a bit, haha). Anywho, you kept the story flowing with no awkward gaps whatsoever. Thanks (:

two things

a) how can she be 20 and in school? college more like it.

b) dont you think 16 years is a bit much...i mean, 7-8 would be more realistic right?

...sry just HAD 2 do dat. going bak 2 d story now

This was a very sweet ending. Plus it's in one of my two favourite seasons. :)

This is totally mean but when I glanced down and saw 'We can't be together,' I just burst into a fit of giggles.