Reviews for Wild Lavender |
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![]() ![]() I always love when you get to see a scene from another character's perspective, and you did a great job. Thanks for taking the time :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Went to read this one right after that scencein Sweet Miseria. I pity both Viola and Leon, for their past and their dashed hopes. To be honest, I was expecting Viola to end up with the werewolf before reading Sweet Miseria. Colour me shock whenwe find out the werewolf was actually her ex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im in the process of finishing sweet miseria and im only 3/5 thru. 1 thing i can say is i love it! and after reading this one-shot ur officially my fave supernatural writer! that sounds weird,rite?haha im still torn between leon and edward but i lean more toward edward cause he seems like her equal,not merely a protector. this one-shot sure is a nice insight. first love is always there, it's a strong love even if it's not ur strongest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was beautifully bittersweet... He loves her, but he's not in love with her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this actually made me like leon more hes so confused its kind of pathetically adorable :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it so sad! i feel so sorry for vi, she loved him and he got someone who was the opposite of her. Then she was hurt even more by Ed! it so sad it hurts, i can't wait to find out what happens with Viola next :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... ... ... ... I am so mad with you right now, I think I'm about to blow... ... ... ... calmth... come to me... ... FIne, here goes nothing... WHY THE FLYING FUCK DID HE FUCKING LEAVE HER IF HE FUCKING LOVED HER! (excuse the french) MY GOD! AND NOT FOR THE FIRST TIME EITHER! HOW DARE THAT BASTARD! (again, my accent isn't well today) HE IS A FRIGGEN WUS! UGH! but your right. it did help his character a little. I feel a little better that if he got back with her, it wasn't just because Chloe was long gone. He got a few extra points, I guess. *grudgingly hands over a few points, grinding my teeth* But I realized how bad these reviews seem, so I'm going to tack on that you are an awesome writer and I LOVE your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I don't hate Leon but this kind of made it easier to understand how I felt about the character. You should consider writing a few events from his point of view like other short side stories. :] I'd love to see how he reacted that night when Viola first kissed Edward in the woods. :D Loved this side story! Also, cannot wait for the next chapter! -Stace :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() makes a nice change hearing it from Leon's point of view. although i like sweet miseria being told solely through viola's eyes. funny how viola had no idea what just went through leon's head. its cute, but they need closure and i prefer viola with the vamp - so definately can't wait for the next chapter of sweet miseria... ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha I don't know what to think anymore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, so Leon's still in the game then? It's not going to be a simple Viola/ Edward if that is the pairing. Look forward to the next chap of SM. |