|Reviews for A little sleep|
| Isca chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
"Can you hear the silence?" Powerful. Philosophical.
"You're a substitute." Impacting.
| NocturnalNerd chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
This was a bit odd, but i liked it. It seems to have a lot of feeling in it, especially the bridge and chorus. One line of the bridge seems a little odd though: "I mean, not even he knows but…" It just seems oddly thrown in there. Perhaps word it a bit better?
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
This is beautiful! It all just flowed so wonderfully together.
I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work; it would mean a lot to me!
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
"Nobody’s loved like he did, that’s why
…. I’m sorry."
I liked those lines, it seemed like it flowed well and its so true!
"I put down before making a sound"
I liked the rhyming there. Dont know if it was supposed to rhyme, but it did. Which is good! :D