Reviews for What If
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I like this.

Nice job!
Anna Christie chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Hmm... I'm not understanding the whole "improv" thing?

The chorus is nice. Going to purevolume...
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Honestly, this song seemed like two seperate songs. I hated the first half. But, the 2nd half was all right. All in all I would have to say your song was :P. (a low medium) But, I think if you picked that 1st half up to be more like the 2nd 1/2 then you would have more of a flow to the song.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I liked it! I thought it was a very sweet song, and so true. I'm feeling kinda like this about a dude at my school right now. :D

Chorus was beautiful! I liked the way it flowed, and the words were really awesome!

Verses were great too! All around a good song. :D