|Reviews for weekend mashup|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
"And it's you they have a hankering for you." Aww. This is such a cute line.
"I can still feel them looking." This line is quite striking and profound. I really like the idea that, even with our eyes closed, we can still view the world somehow.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
wow, beautiful work!
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
"and though our eyelids may be shut
i can still feel them looking"
"soon the sleep will be gone from my eyes"
Wonderful lines, they really caught my attention.
I love the ending.
An amazingly written piece.