Reviews for When Life Gives You Pens
frugale chapter 5 . 2/23/2010
Again, amazing last line.
frugale chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
'color faded world'

REALLY liked that line.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I like this because it asks a really great question. One that we all wonder about sometimes.

I love the last line. That descriptions is really great. I've never thought of describing the world like that, but it fits so perfectly.

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nickyO chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
like the open ended question
sealednectar chapter 7 . 1/23/2010
i like this haiku, so much emotion behind it: suspicion, weakness, unjadedness (that's more of a feeling). Anyway, good haiku.
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
I like the way you put this in a question rather than a statement, and it looks almost like a twofold questioning of God. Why tolerate this evil and why place us here?
Eternal Skies chapter 3 . 9/24/2009
i love your haikus! throw all our 'bad' feelings in fire
Eternal Skies chapter 2 . 9/23/2009
i liked this, but it made me wanna know more, heh
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
i liked this, it's true and i liked the color-faded part

this world had been living for years
your infection their plague chapter 5 . 9/21/2009
Truly lovely.

All five:


Well put together.
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