I want Hollywood and Gary to end up together. At first, I was in between about which guy I shipped Hollywood with, but this temporary chapter just tipped the scales to Gary's favour. Love built on friendship is the best kind of love, and Gary's loved him forever! *heart-eyes emojis forever*

Also Brooklyn isn't technically a city, and you said all the siblings are named after cities. And wow , I swear I'm not usually this nitpicky, but you said you don't mind and I figure any review I'd better than no review.

I don't consider 5'7 to be very short. I'm that tall, and plenty of guys are the same height or shorter than me. It seems pretty average, especially for high school.

Want to read more!

AHHHH MY ABOUT FAVORITE WORK OF FICTION IS BACK FROM HIATUS! I check in every so often and imagine my surprise when I see the little number 11 on the chapter bar! Ahhh I can't wait to find out the beef gary has wih Leslie like I love Leslie but I don't find her nearly as intriguing a character as Gary or brook or holly. I love holly so muchh and I'm glad he's rightfully angry at gary. The tensionnnnn. I want to see more of brock sweeping holly off of his feet now that they're on the same UF team ahhh I love them. im suspicious of leslies true feelings towards holly tbh bc I've always felt that the bond on her side was more sisterly towards him while he viewed her romantically. Gary is such a lovely character because of his selfishness and meanness bc he was just so sweet and lovely and dependable in the beginning...then we get to see you test that and they both balance very well and make him a great character. I hope you can update again soon babeee 3

No matter how confused this story has me, I am so into it.

Can't get enough!

Why is everything still such a dang mystery!? I still feel like I just walked into the middle of a movie, and I don't even know what movie is playing. Is this one of those stories where everything is revealed in the last chapter? Cause why. Welcome back though!

Nice chapter. Really, really cute story. So waiting for the next!

Loving all the gay. Looking forward to some dirty action though. The anticipation is getting too much! Xoxo Robin

TOOO WILLDD
your description of garybabys expressions and reactions are too heartbreaking and brock is so perfect like i need something to shatter my image of him quick...lmao i want holly and brooklyn to have communication and get everything out in the open and have holly have a positive role model but knowing holly itll be lots of convulted turmoil which i love just as much.

OMFG. I am absolutely loving your fic. I just want to keep reading! Cant wait for your next update!
Had so many theories about their relationships hehe
atm im rooting for H and B. But the little love triangle is cute.

Hurmmmm.. did I miss something? What does the game means?

I am all about GaryxHolly right now! Brock is weird and too perfect. Gary is adorbs 3. I love this story yay!

Omg what is with all the secrets?! I'm dying here, I have zero idea what's happening it's like half the story is happening behind the scenes omg.

Also, why the fuck does Mackenna think he has any right to give Hollywood a disapproving stare? he has his own issues to deal with and he already said he didn't care if Brooklyn was gay like damn Mackenna, lick a vag. Definitely don't like Mackenna already. He's so judgy and he just met the brother who he already said was brooklyns fav. Might wanna get on his good side for a bit.