I am so for Gary x Hollywood now. before I was in-between, but Brock has this weird vibe about him. not a bad weird vibe, but a weird one nonetheless.

I HAVE NO IDEA WHO I LOVE MORE IM SO TORN BETWEEN BROCK AND GARY UGH

Really liked it. Looking forward to more!

'My mom did the laundry while we were at school' MY ASS

also DARK SHIT TO COME? more like TAKE MY MONEY HONEY

gary's a lying little bunny. gary imtimidates me. when he was doing that iceking routine by the door of the classroom i was like 'ho' shit run brock u gon die' but also 'MY BAAABBY' so in a way gary is kinda like a very snarly, angry hamster because its kinda terrifying but also very cute? but i like it go snarly hamster gary! getchur man! everytime holly is rude to brock i want to cry like brock was such a fucking puppy after the UF team rejection but it still fucks me out how one minute brock is hella thirsty and the next he's all 'nahh me? i'm a good boy' like shit brocky you gotta dominate holly's ass to get him to take you srs holly is so fuckin cute but he has this knack for stirring shit i just want him to get bent over somebody's knee he's like one of them really disgruntledass cats like 'no i don't like you. stop showing me in affection. nooo.' like bitch you appreciate it don't make me kiss u

as he lets out a groan and utters this cracked, no, broken even
"Fuck, Hollywood"

this made me so emotional you know my stomach clenched and errything

"big, gay laundry bash", hah. I'm officially in love with Gary. The way that kiss was handled was sublime, and also I love your analogies. The memory loss though? Not cute. Not cute at all. Quickly go do some more counseling, Gary!

I absolutely adore Leslie. I'm very mad at Gary for keeping secrets. Lenox is a sweetheart but should be fed on time. Brock and Leslie's relationship is one big question mark. And why doesn't Hollywood make a move! I would be all over Leslie if she were in my kitchen! Like serving coffee and baking! Is he in too much of a daze to talk? x)

"- because you are, and always will be, too short to reach." How brilliant is that?
I love your intro and the way you introduce Hollywood. At first I thought Oh No! another 'boy is so skinny and pretty' fic, but then he quit the team just like that, bam, and his personality was established.
Gary is the best thing in the world, I love the optimistic type. I choose to ignore he's a manwhore, for now. Maybe it'll serve the plot...

This first chapter was an incredibly fun ride already.

Quick question: how often do you update? Just out of curiosity. Not gonna pressure you or anything, because trust me. I know writers block. I've been battling it for just over a month now. Tis a strong opponent, this one...

GARY IS SO FULL OF SHIT REMEMBER THAT SLIP OF PAPER HOLLYWOOD FOUND IN THE POCKET
That is PROOF how's gary gonna bullshit his way outta that
Possessive Gary and this dark Brock thing you got goin' on is really sexy and there's there's this BEAUTIFUL rivalry
Such a tangled web we've got going on and REALLY kills me but every chapter is so worth it
Can i have my very own brock or gary please i need this story in my life 100/10 would recommend
Hollywood is so sweet and honestly confused my poor BAAABE

lol, last line. I'm having a hard time believing that the laundry scene was a dream, and Gary must be messing with Hollywood's mind. Doesn't seem that hard, with him being real edgy. Thanks for the update!

There is never enough gay, lol

everything is so wonderfully set up guhhh
i keep getting surprised by everything and i would sell my soul to know how it all pans out
update whenever you can ilu bae