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This is amazing, but cliffy! I need to know what happens next, I like it all, the characters and the plt and your style of writing is so good.

Wow, I sound crazy

Anyways, I await your newest work!

I'm so so glad I stumbled onto this story! It's rare that a story on here with "humor" as a catagory is actually funny at all. This is really hilarious. I can't wait to read more!

xD Loved chapter 2! I think Gary is hilarious! "'We fell into radioactive goo last Tuesday and now if we’re separated for too long, we’ll explode.' What a Sci-Fi nerd. Except the dumbass kind who doesn’t actually know what he’s talking about" Lmao! You have no idea how much I laughed at that.

Anyway, I'm realy curious about what was wrong with Gary when he left in the middle of class. And why Brock calls him slut. I love Gary. He's well cool.

Brock is such an enigma! I can't figure out his personality. Sometimes he seems shy and other times he seems totally different. I loove it! xD

And Damn you! I lost the game too now! Lol.

Anyway, Love the story. Keep up the good work and update soon. I can't wait! :D

Woah. I'm officially in love with this story. The plotline is really interesting and the characters are actually believable. I think Hollywood sounds really cute with his short stature. :D And I love how he immediately hates Brock. "And what the hell? He’s nicknamed me? Have I even said anything to him? Does he even know my name? Friendly chap, this guy is. I don’t like him." For some reason I found that line hilarious. I laughed for like ten minutes. Lol. So I'm really enjoying this story and was wondering if maybe I can be expecting an update soon? I'll love you forever if you do update! xD Anyway keep up the good work. I actually cannot wait for the next chapter. I am hooked. :D

This is great, BLT. I'm loving Hollywood, you're characterizing everything really well (and this is just the first chapter, hoshit), I like the descriptions, the use of language, and it's well-written to boot! :D I also love Gary, just thought you should know. I'm officially keeping either he or Hollywood, possibly both, because I love them. I don't want Holly to be ashamed of his shortness - it makes him cute (in my mind) - and Brock sounds appropriately hot. Leslie English sounds like s nice character so far; normally I hate female love interests. I'm biased like that. :P I mean, not if they're cool, but usually they ping a bell on my biyatch meter, so...yep, biased. But she sounds nice. Then again, love is blinde, deaf and dumb sometimes. We'll see. I look forward to seeing, though. :D Glad you posted your work, BLT, because I now like you personally and as a writer (you can bet that my review is 100percent true, though, because like I mentioned on the forum, I don't only read people's things because I like them).

Can't wait for more!

This story's really good. I'm glad it doesn't contain much ultimate Frisbee yet, there's a lot of other sports.