I love it!

Good start, author in crime. i like it.

Ah cute! What a sweet relationship. But I have a feeling all of this is gonna change quite soon. More detail, setting, description, and emotion may be needed here in order to show a more conceivable description of your characters, surroundings and overall plot but that's okay. It's your story, so I say go for whatever you please. Keep it up.

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