Reviews for Black God's Web
Rey.D.L chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
...Ok some of the phrases where hard to understand, I dont know if it has to do with spelling mistakes or not but I had to re-read parts.
The characters for a short are really well formed. Hatred is portrayed pretty good, I still almost find him a little of a sap though like a puppy with a bad bite not a wolf with bite and bark. as for jishaan he's interesting a little dullared with one track mind but good for a shot story. I like hatred though.
Good begining, middle and end. Very straight to point.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Ok some of the phrases where hard to understand, I dont know if it has to do with spelling mistakes or not but I had to re-read parts.
The characters for a short are really well formed. Hatred is portrayed pretty good, I still almost find him a little of a sap though like a puppy with a bad bite not a wolf with bite and bark. as for jishaan he's interesting a little dullared with one track mind but good for a shot story. I like hatred though.
Good begining, middle and end. Very straight to point.