|Reviews for Snack Machine|
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
wow, did you mean that it was too big a coincedence and so it's supernatural?
this was written well, more than well, and it was smooth and easy to read. plus, i loved the ending. she could've died! wow,wow...but the last sentence didn't make sense:
"though how you’d that is beyond me.” you'd doesn't make sense, maybe by mistake?
anyway, it's really good!