Reviews for The Mad and The Conqueror
miss.tired of waiting chapter 37 . 3/26/2012
Its been like 2 years and you havnt updated:( where are you?don't you care about us?come backk now before I die and woont be able to finnish this amazing storyyyyy!update please:(
julianmarq chapter 5 . 3/15/2012
your story was good right until this point. What happened at the end was just completely unrealistic and against the character (Madison) you had just created.

I was already discouraged of keeping reading it because it wasn't updated since one year and a half and as, as I kept reading, more it looked like a cheap porn movie plot (that with all the lewd comments and "unexplained attractions" and whatever) but it was still interesting... but what happened right at the end of this chapter just confirmed it.

I'm not against stories with smut, but it's got to be somewhat believable.
Jane chapter 32 . 3/9/2012
Thank you so much for writing this story. Every time I read it, it touches my heart in all the right places and then gives me some smexy time to jumpstart it. I can't believe it's been two years since the last update, but I haven't given up hope! Please begin writing again; you are too talented to stop! It would also just be cruel to deny us more.

Love,

A patient reader.
signourney chapter 10 . 2/29/2012
This is a brilliant chapter _
omyrowling chapter 20 . 2/26/2012
You can definitely twist someone's ear.

The pulling the pants far away enough from his body would be hard to get the contents in it... but, it could happen. guys were loose pants these days, don't they?
omyrowling chapter 19 . 2/25/2012
please,

Marry me.
omyrowling chapter 18 . 2/25/2012
"Jesus fuck"

I enjoy you.
omyrowling chapter 15 . 2/25/2012
I'M SO HAPPY Caine's a gentleman.

:)

But hot damn, if I were her... mmm

Sleep now because I must write an essay tomorrow, but we shall meet again soon sleep-thief.
omyrowling chapter 14 . 2/25/2012
WHY do I love Caine So?

it's 4:00 am here... awesome sauce.

damn you, you sleep destroyer!
omyrowling chapter 11 . 2/25/2012
"Take that back. Take your sinister good wishes and throw them at someone else."

I love this.
omyrowling chapter 9 . 2/24/2012
Why do you apologise for swearing? This is an 'M' fic.

Also, why are you so awesome?
omyrowling chapter 7 . 2/24/2012
This is a sleep-loser. Your story, that is.

I am basically going to say goodbye to sleep for the next week or so until I finish it.

Be honoured,

there aren't many.

Besides, sleep is for the weak.
omyrowling chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
I love your story so far.

I also have a secret love affair with new zealand.

:)
theslykit chapter 37 . 2/18/2012
i really hate that you are MIA now because i love this story and i want to know what happens next! :(
DA-chen1 chapter 18 . 2/8/2012
MANLY PLANY?

Oh no! no! no! It's not real what I read right now!

Oh f*ck it...

Mira
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