Reviews for The Mad and The Conqueror |
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![]() ![]() Its been like 2 years and you havnt updated:( where are you?don't you care about us?come backk now before I die and woont be able to finnish this amazing storyyyyy!update please:( |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story was good right until this point. What happened at the end was just completely unrealistic and against the character (Madison) you had just created. I was already discouraged of keeping reading it because it wasn't updated since one year and a half and as, as I kept reading, more it looked like a cheap porn movie plot (that with all the lewd comments and "unexplained attractions" and whatever) but it was still interesting... but what happened right at the end of this chapter just confirmed it. I'm not against stories with smut, but it's got to be somewhat believable. |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for writing this story. Every time I read it, it touches my heart in all the right places and then gives me some smexy time to jumpstart it. I can't believe it's been two years since the last update, but I haven't given up hope! Please begin writing again; you are too talented to stop! It would also just be cruel to deny us more. Love, A patient reader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a brilliant chapter _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can definitely twist someone's ear. The pulling the pants far away enough from his body would be hard to get the contents in it... but, it could happen. guys were loose pants these days, don't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() please, Marry me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Jesus fuck" I enjoy you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'M SO HAPPY Caine's a gentleman. :) But hot damn, if I were her... mmm Sleep now because I must write an essay tomorrow, but we shall meet again soon sleep-thief. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY do I love Caine So? it's 4:00 am here... awesome sauce. damn you, you sleep destroyer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Take that back. Take your sinister good wishes and throw them at someone else." I love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do you apologise for swearing? This is an 'M' fic. Also, why are you so awesome? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a sleep-loser. Your story, that is. I am basically going to say goodbye to sleep for the next week or so until I finish it. Be honoured, there aren't many. Besides, sleep is for the weak. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so far. I also have a secret love affair with new zealand. :) |
![]() ![]() i really hate that you are MIA now because i love this story and i want to know what happens next! :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() MANLY PLANY? Oh no! no! no! It's not real what I read right now! Oh f*ck it... Mira |