Reviews for The Mad and The Conqueror
Sistine Callawell chapter 8 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 7 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 5 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
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Sistine Callawell chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
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Wananeya chapter 37 . 7/19/2011
Please update thissssssssss! I need soooooo much moreeee! update soon!
ithinkyourgay chapter 27 . 7/16/2011
when i got up to chapter 35, i realised that the story was incomplete and that you HADN'T UPDATED IN NEARLY A YEAR!

really great story by the way.

but there are too many characters that you are centralising on.

evil people like ava and blake should stay together.

love madison and caine!
VitalStar chapter 19 . 7/11/2011
Please continue, this is totally awesome. : D
star.coated.sneakers chapter 37 . 7/7/2011
"Where'd you go, I miss you so, seems like it's been forever since your been gone" that pretty much summarizes what I want to say. Please update soon :)
Follow-The-Spiders chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Hi.

Just a quick suggestion: you might want to include dividers in order to differentiate when the point of view (or point of focus) of (or on) a character changes. It will help ease the flow of the story.

So far, so good.

I like the tone you have in this; you manage to bring out the characteristics of each character by focusing on them from a third person point of view. Very creative; just like Rick Riordan does in his series.

Keep it up.
lovecameronmitchell chapter 37 . 6/28/2011
Hello? Anybody there? Are you dead? Please please please please UPDATE! :'(
clichelover chapter 37 . 6/23/2011
I F***ING LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
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