Reviews for The Mad and The Conqueror |
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![]() ![]() Please update thissssssssss! I need soooooo much moreeee! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() when i got up to chapter 35, i realised that the story was incomplete and that you HADN'T UPDATED IN NEARLY A YEAR! really great story by the way. but there are too many characters that you are centralising on. evil people like ava and blake should stay together. love madison and caine! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue, this is totally awesome. : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Where'd you go, I miss you so, seems like it's been forever since your been gone" that pretty much summarizes what I want to say. Please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. Just a quick suggestion: you might want to include dividers in order to differentiate when the point of view (or point of focus) of (or on) a character changes. It will help ease the flow of the story. So far, so good. I like the tone you have in this; you manage to bring out the characteristics of each character by focusing on them from a third person point of view. Very creative; just like Rick Riordan does in his series. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() Hello? Anybody there? Are you dead? Please please please please UPDATE! :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I F***ING LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! |