Good thing this chapter wasn't a cliff hanger because you've been gone for a while!

I can accept this as an ending although it isn't. They're together. Nate and Blondie are together. Ryan and Noelle are not. Everything is perfect, ha.

I absolutely hate the fact that Noel came into the picture.

Good story? Yes.

Too many side plots going on? Definitely.

There's the blondie and Nate.

Caine and Madison.

Ryan and Noel.

Ryan and Madison (in his head).

Blah and blah.

Blah and blah.

I just think stories are better when they rotate around one couple, but maybe throw one more into the mixture. Like, Ryan could've been happy with his gf and Nate and blondie could've gotten together, but Noel just adds toooooo much to this story. All of the things going on takes away from the focus which is Caine and Madison getting together. Now at the end we're bound to have 3 unexpected couples which is waaayyy to much. Actually, one over but that's all it takes to make a story to busy. Not saying your writing isn't good, I'm just saying that there's a lot going on. Maybe tooooo much.

Oh, God. I'm so in love with this story, the characters, everything about it. I can't tell you how many emotions I've been going through while reading this, I love it. You're amazing for that :)

I just feel bad that Caine and Madison's happiness may take a sharp turn in the other direction thanks to some not-so-lovable characters :( Hope you update soon!

I have had this story bookmarked for a good year and only now have I gotten around to reading it... and WOW, I'm ashamed I let myself wait this long; I feel like Caine holding out for so long!

I love how fleshed out your characters are, from the Twidiots to Adam, every character is relatable and human to me (and I'm sure all of the other readers). The chapter lengths are perfect: short enough to read in one setting, but long enough to fulfill any questions presented from the previous one and satisfy the reader.

You're doing an awesome job as far as plot goes, everything is progressing at a perfect rate and it's almost like Madison's life is happening at the same time as everyday *real life* is occurring.

Keep up the good work and I hope to hear not only from you, but Madison and Caine in the near future!

-Amber

This Chapter. I am speechless, oh my.

taylor swiftz 'sparkz fly' totally suits this story ... i'm just waiting 4r the next chapter.

omfg i cant believe you just stopped here!

you deserved to be punished for making us suffer like this... xP

please update soon! in the mean time...i will be rereading this...:)

Omg I am totally in love with this story and the characters! I freaking loveee Madison she is bloody funny and the wittiest girl character I have ever read about! I think this story is so well done and very very clever!

I actually cannot help but laugh at some of the things Madison comes out with! I really hope that you update soon because I will go mad if you don't! I'm serious!

Please please please update!

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This chapter is probably one the best I have read by you. All of your chapters are great but I especially love this one.

This story basically got me through nine, long, boring, tedious hours at work today (we'll ignore the fact that I should have been working :D). Your story is comedy gold - seriously, when I'm in a sour mood this is a primary outlet. I sincerely hope you update soon - it's been way too long!

Omg update update update!

Two things... "focused" and "he sent it past me".

As opposed to "focussed" and "he sent it passed me".

That's all!

UPDATE SOON!

I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH

I LOVE THIS STORY!

Update please!

OH. MY. I am in love with this couple, they are so adorable, and He is just so determined, and Madison is going on her first date. Words can't describe how good this is, you are talented. Hope to like this story even more.