Hi. I just wanted to write that I thought this story was really really really awesome. I didn't even notice that you haven't even completed it until it was written in your author's note. I just wanted to tell you I love Madison and Caine. I really really love Madison's character, she kinda reminds me a little bit of myself. I can't believe they finally had sex, took them a while. I was actually surprised they did, I seriously thought he put it off until the bet time was over or until he told Madison about the bet. I just wanted to say I think you did a really good job with this story and I absolutely can't wait to read what is next to come. :)

I'm going to give my full critique later on when I finish the story, but your story really needs respect for authority. Adults aren't blubbering idiots, they usually know what they're talking about...so you might want to give them that respect in your story.

Very good story. Just one question though: aren't Caine and the twins cousins? And he still wants to have sex with them?

I like the way this is going. He should just tell her already! And their love is adorable.

Apologies for not reviewing but wow! This story just had me wanting to read chapter after chapter & as a result alot of lack of sleep :)

I love how different and feisty Maddison is, I don't think anyones nailed that type of personality quite like you. Also she speechs so fluently and witty without seemingly like a challenge.

The only slight critique I'd have is some of the other characters (like blake or something) sometimes sound a little too smart & well spoken (like maddy) for their character. I know its your style, :) but thought I'd point it out.

This reminds me I HATE the king & queen of bitchiness. Seriously Ava & Blake should be voted off the island... but not before they get a taste of their own medicine! (cue maddy kick some ass)

I love cheslea & nate. We should definetly see more of them :)

I'm dreading when Maddy finds out about the bet she will literally castrate poor ol' Caine... or worse. Please don't let her be too hard on him? :(

Anyway I won't waste anymore of your time. Please update. Your stories really addictive!

x L

If I fail my hsc it's going to be on your head man, this story is freaking addictive! I can't wait until you update next. Is it just me or is or is Madison a lot like Bones? Either way I love her character!

great chapter

absolutely loved it

update soon :)

UPDATE! please... :P

please update soon! I need my Mad and Conqueror fix :)

I really liked this chapter. The Caine/Madison pairing is a delight to read about, but some of the other characters' interaction also makes the story fascinating. In particular, I would like to see more of Blake's actions explored. Although he is one of the main antagonists of this story, he is still a 3-dimensional character, and he does come across as somewhat torn in his interactions with Madison. This contrasts nicely with the actions of Ava, who harbors no such doubts.

On a side note: have you selected pictures of each of the main characters in your story? Its always interesting to see how authors envision their characters' appearances. Anyways, its a fantastic story, and I hope you update soon!

So I've been following this story for ages but I've only just recently (as in five minutes ago) gotten an account which is why I am only just now reviewing, adding you to my favorites and all that jazz so please let me start off by saying this,

HOLY POO I LOVE YOUR STORY!

And in case the capitals aren't enough just pretend that the previous statement is underlined and bold and italic cause thats how serious I am.

second of all I would like to say this,

I check everyday to see if you've updated. Yes that is how obsessed I am with your story. Should you be scared? Possibly. Should you be happy? I would think yes.

And thirdly,

This story is, in the famous words of Marty the Zebra, Crackalakin.

OH MY FREAKING GANDALAF!

that was HOT!

anywho i love the way the story is going , my fave character here is madison she is much more like me than anyone else in the story (tehehe i hvae short temper and i think you can guess the rest ...)

caine - damn fictional guys .

Chelsea reminds me soo much like my cousin

you are an AWSOME writer i read all of it in one go w/o even getting up from my chair jeebejus thats something for my fish like span of attention .

UPDATE SOON!

and please make Nate and ava die of swine flu or something ...they both are meanie beanie ( i know i am weird that way -)

WAH! *cries*

you're mean to us, you know that, right?

i miss this stoorry!

Only started reading dis story 2days ago..i think itz realy good i love the characters nd their personalities cnt w8 til your next update

LMAO this chapter was hilarious! i seriously almost peed my pants laughing :D