Reviews for Shattered Illusions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So, I like the story so far. I am not a fan of fictionpress vampire stories, but your work is pretty original. I like the character development so far as well. Tsubomi and Copernicus both jump out as really well developed and interesting characters. My only critique so far is mechanical. I originally presumed the story was 3rd person limited from Tsubomi's POV, but it seems more like 3rd person omniscient and you haphazardly head-jump back and forth between Tsubomi and Copernicus. The POV is a bit disorienting and hard to follow. The dialogue in the story can be hard to follow sometimes too. There is a lot of short rapid dialogue back and forth between Tsubomi and Copernicus and it is hard to keep track of who is speaking. Anyway, I hope that helps with editing. I plan to keep reading because I am enjoying it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that Tsubomi can get out and not get caught again. I don't want Hizaki to win again. :C |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the MillieXYale relationship even more now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter! I really loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I squeed when I read this! Tsubomi and Copernicus are so cute together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Millie. I feel sorry for her and wow, Hide is plotting to kill his own men...Then again Estella did betray him by trying to keep Yale to himself. I wonder what will happen to her. Will she die by Copernicus' hand or Hide's? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a wonderful chapter. I liked your imagery and the bond between Millie and Yale. I hope that she gets to see him again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things are getting heated up with the action! I love your fight scenes so much and you make all of them so different! Much kudos to yuou for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, I love YaleMillie as a couple! They are adorable together! -ships them- I can't wait for your next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to know what happens next! Please don't let Millie die! I like her and her yaoi fantasies between Copernicus and Tsubomi! I wonder what Copernicus got for her as a present too. I think it's funny that Tsubomi cringes at it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute, and Millie always makes me laugh. Good job on this chapter! I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing and I'd definitely recommend anyone who had a notion to read it. Just awesome characters, superb action and it was fun to read. See you around and thanks for letting me read such a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just a bunch of closing, and I had a feeling it would be. All in all it was enjoyable and it answered questions that I had a little earlier. Your story was amazing and your characters are fantastic. I'm glad I could help give you some great reviews. Your story definitely deserves the recognition. I consider it a classic. Now, onto the epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this fight was just epic, and it looks like everything came out for our heroes. It's hard to know that there is another chapter after this, since everything died down. I wonder what else is left for me to learn about the characters and their struggles. |