| Reviews for Harem Girl |
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   Satabdi chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 Wao it is amazing... |
| gemma chapter 1 . 6/3/2013 The story does not sound right. Harem means forbidden. It is forbidden to another man. So it is impossible that a man would kiss his concubine or slave in front of other men. |
| jamama chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 good one |
| Liley chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 I love this! Very nice plot and well written. I can't wait to read more of this :D |
| The Scarlet Berry chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 Oh my god. This was one of the best stories I've read in such a long time! Please, please, please continue! I'm begging you! |
| beckyberry chapter 1 . 5/1/2012 Oh my gosh this is amazing I wish I was as blessed with writing talents as you please please please write more when you get the chance I know you're busy and all but I'm already in love with this story |
| ash chapter 1 . 1/13/2012 i really like this story it reminds me of the movie stargate in a way, with regard to tarik when you discribe him. the prince in stargate(RA)seem very similar, anyhow i would love to see how the story grows however i dont have a fictionpress acount so may be you could email me |
| Recalcitrance chapter 1 . 6/27/2011 Good work :) It was clean of errors and written very well. I wish I could read more! |
| Kuchisabishii chapter 1 . 3/23/2011 this was really interesting... i liked it! |
| Carina Pir chapter 1 . 1/28/2011 Very nicely done! I love the idea of a harem with girls from all over the universe. I think you did a good job making the men not overly lusty but not super nice either. I was afraid Tarik would turn into the perfect guy by the end of the chapter but he's wonderfully balanced. You have created a good setting for come interesting conflict and, of course, some sexy scenes. I must admit dominance and submission is a turn on for me. Good Job! |
| Rosie chapter 1 . 9/17/2010 hey i was wondering if you were going to update soon? i really like this story and i want to see where it goes! |
| Dark-Passion67 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010 I think I am in love with this story already :) I am really interested to see how the story plays out, especially learning more about Tarik ! Will this story be updated after The Breath of Lies is done ? |
| Hittichowa chapter 1 . 3/22/2010 Oh my God! I need more! lol this is going to be an amazing story I can tell! Please keep updating! Thanks, Hittichowa. |
| M.D chapter 1 . 1/7/2010 oh one more thing. when will u ever update? |
| M.d chapter 1 . 1/7/2010 secound of all.. good job on the characters i swear somne people lose it. the normal human reaction is to find a way out liek dat anyone wouldve done the same. and the vicious guy..yeah vicious |