Reviews for Harem Girl
Satabdi chapter 1 . 7/19/2018
Wao it is amazing...
gemma chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
The story does not sound right. Harem means forbidden. It is forbidden to another man. So it is impossible that a man would kiss his concubine or slave in front of other men.
jamama chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
good one
Liley chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I love this! Very nice plot and well written.
I can't wait to read more of this :D
The Scarlet Berry chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Oh my god. This was one of the best stories I've read in such a long time! Please, please, please continue! I'm begging you!
beckyberry chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Oh my gosh this is amazing I wish I was as blessed with writing talents as you please please please write more when you get the chance I know you're busy and all but I'm already in love with this story
ash chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
i really like this story it reminds me of the movie stargate in a way, with regard to tarik when you discribe him. the prince in stargate(RA)seem very similar, anyhow i would love to see how the story grows however i dont have a fictionpress acount so may be you could email me
Recalcitrance chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Good work :) It was clean of errors and written very well. I wish I could read more!
Kuchisabishii chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
this was really interesting... i liked it!
Carina Pir chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Very nicely done! I love the idea of a harem with girls from all over the universe. I think you did a good job making the men not overly lusty but not super nice either. I was afraid Tarik would turn into the perfect guy by the end of the chapter but he's wonderfully balanced. You have created a good setting for come interesting conflict and, of course, some sexy scenes. I must admit dominance and submission is a turn on for me. Good Job!
Rosie chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
hey i was wondering if you were going to update soon? i really like this story and i want to see where it goes!
Dark-Passion67 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
I think I am in love with this story already :)

I am really interested to see how the story plays out, especially learning more about Tarik !

Will this story be updated after The Breath of Lies is done ?
Hittichowa chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Oh my God! I need more! lol this is going to be an amazing story I can tell! Please keep updating! Thanks, Hittichowa.
M.D chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
oh one more thing.

when will u ever update?
M.d chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
secound of all..

good job on the characters i swear somne people lose it.

the normal human reaction is to find a way out liek dat anyone wouldve done the same. and the vicious guy..yeah vicious
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