Reviews for Beating Heart
aby pwn u chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
good chapter :)
Fumbling Feelings chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
That was really powerful.
P. S. Giovanni chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
It's such a pity how steriotypes and cliches become someone's defense. This can be also recognized a blanket statement. I think this occurs because the person doesn't have a mind of their own and relies on what "the norm" or, better yet, what the accepted is for their guide in life. Not ALL people are the same so how can you apply a universal statement to them or to a certain group? The only place universal, steriotypical statements should strive should be in good humor, and there is nothing funny about this.
lever du soleil chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I'm not quite certain of your meaning in this work. Do you mean to say we shouldn't ignore them, or that we try to hard to? Short and simple. I like that.

I feel a bit ignorant asking for meaning here, I'll admit.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
If this really happened I'm sorry. It's hard for me to realate to this poem bc i'm a girl and it's more of a guy's poem.