Absolutely adorab;e, I love it!

So. Once upon a time, there was this bored girl who decided she needed to read something. But, poor little soul, she couldn't find anything she liked. And then, the C2 fairy godmother showed her the way and she found this story! Happily ever after :D

...Except that she forgot to review, the little brat. But she has now cometh back to review like she should have.

OK, writing about myself in third person is tiring XD Anyway, I read this last night, but I was in such a rush to go read other things you had that I totally forgot to review lol Then I slapped myself because I hate when people do that -_- And here I am reviewing :D

Now, to the actual review: That was awesome! Loved it, all of it, every character. Julian was so cute and, I don't know, way more mature than my friends (college kids, you would think they've outgrown their high school ways. Not a chance), which made him even cuter. I really liked Phoebe's narration style. BUt my favorite character was Lori LOL She was awesome.

That was all I really wanted to say XD DO you realize that the actual review part of this thing its not even half? Ah, woe is me.

Loves,

Spark

my favorite one-shots and stories have alwayz been the ones where they actually love each other, those are the ones that make me feel good:). this woz cute, cant wait 2 read the 1 about lori, shes my favorite lol. thankuD

This is definitely one of the most realistic fictionpress stories I've ever seen :3

Plus I adore australia! I've got family there D

It was very cute and I LOVED IT

Lori made me laugh :D

Aww.. That was really cute! Julian is awesome!

Loved the One shot. Yes, it was very realistic. I loved when they finally got together. When phoebe puked because of food poisoning, and not because of what red head told her. I loved Loris attitude throughout the entire fic. There's always someone you know that's like that.

-IJM

"Except your mom when you were six and thought the F word meant 'hello'." : i LOL real hard at this line. my fave!

nobody can say summer love is not sweet(this is not summer love in the usual context but it happened during the summer,no? :p)

julian is just so romantic. i dont know why but i feel like he is *sighs and drools*

and lori totally rocked!

oh, and the story is realistic,dear. (and cute to boot )

Ah I hate belly button piercings. You get pregnant and next thing you know, the seemingly harmless belly piercing becomes the source of all pain. -_-' It starts to stretch out and just-gah! xP Good story. It was cute and realistic.

aww it was so sweet, I just wish that that witch Christine had gotten what she deserved. Anyway, so great, write more soon please and update Celestia of the Thorns

Great story, so funny.

Love this line: "Except your mom when you were six and thought the F word meant 'hello'."

Don't know why I didn't spot this one before.

Anywayz, cute AND realistic. Awesome.

Love Lori, she cracked me up...!

Ri

Okay, I'm REALLY sorry if a million Australians have already told you this! But, I really have to mention that we don't have Barnes and Noble here (if we do, I am way out of the loop). We do have Borders though!

Secondly, I'm SO glad that there was a snooty hotel guy to inform them that Kangaroos don't randomly prance around the roads. I'm a Sydneysider, born and raised and had never seen a wild Kangaroo until this Winter when I was in the Southern Tablelands. I felt like a giddy little kid! But then I had to concentrate on driving and not running them over! .

A very sweet one-shot! )

I thought this story was SUPER cute (the whole turquoise bra thing) and can I just say, I officially Lori is one of the coolest (fictional) girls to walk this planet.

Great story(:

-Sarah

i love this!

would you pretty please do another about Phoebe and Julian together..?

pweash?

can i please add you up in facebook? :D