I read this right after you posted but wasn't able to review because I usually read stories off my phone which doesn't allow pop-ups. ANYWAY, I'll review it now! (and some of your other stories as well now that I've got a chance to do it)

Well, first of all, I absolutely love it. This is no surprise though, since I love all your stories (well, the ones that I've read anyway). I like how you were able to subtly incorporate all the things requested without making it ridiculous.

And I love how it's set in Australia. You make it sound like a little tropical paradise or something, and if I didn't already live here, that story would've had me wanting to visit. lol.

Anyway, can't wait for anything else you have to offer!

it's very cute and realistick...i realy liked Lori! she's my favorite

This was such an adorable one-shot! I loved the characters and the plot line. It was a little predictable, but so sweet. :) great job!

It did turn out quite realistic... :)

The characters were given time to develop.. even though its a one-shot. Thats what made the story better..

Cool stuff!

Sukanya

I happen to remember from your LJ (hey, I just didn't have time to comment!)that some, erm, details contained in this oneshot *may* be from your personal experience. Speaking of which, did your piercing get infected? if so, I'm sorry :( YUCK/OUCH! This (long) oneshot is super cute and somewhat realistic. I'd say you did really well!

aw! that was... REALLY LONG. XD

ehehehe

and i LOVE it! :D :D :D :D :D

Awe, so cute :D !

Adorable!

Julian sounds like an amazing guy.

You should write a story on them! :)

haha.

Another great oneshot :D and it's long too. I think it was pretty realistic for a romance novel, but the one part about the little boy, I think that he's a little too old to be mistaking the word psyhopath

I've missed your one shots!

Loved this one...haven't read anything on FP for a while now, so I really needed that :) Lori's absolutely brilliant.

Wonder where you got the idea for the piercing from... :P See? I have been (occasionally) reading your LJ! I just couldn't think of a challenge at that point.

~Annoyance

damn thats so freaking cute

and julian is so sweet too

you should turn this into a series like the bus series one and do one on lori and george and nile

i think lori's would be really funny and the guy would definitely be interesting.

very sweet and very cute story.

Aww, that was adorable. Lori's so rockin' cool! :D Haha, I do pity Phoebe's brother xD

Hi! I'm a new reader of yours .. I just wanted to say that I absolutely love all of your stories. You're an amazing writer and I hope you'll continue writing. I'm looking forward to more stories from you.

I adored this one shot so much. It was so cute!

Thanks for the fluffy one-shot! It's been awhile since anyone's posted a good one here. Thanks!

this was absolutely adorable.

i loved the Koalas and the little belly piercing ornament at the end.

omg, i love Julian.

so sweet. :]