Reviews for The Cycle
Filly and Phips chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
I'm in the middle of Survive at the moment


Course this poem is as awesome and sarcastic as ever my friend. The little dashes inbetween each stanza kept throwin me off for some reason(you know me- im crazy like that)

love ya!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
I like how the theme/message of this poem (brief and harsh) is reflected in the rhythm and length of the lines (also short and harsh). An interesting synergy, and I like it. Great work!
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Get up.


Go back to bed.

Got it ;D