This story is awesome! I love the beginning. Please post the next chapter. Like many stories here on fictionpress, the good ones are left unfinish. I don't know why.

Ann

Mh, I like this story! Hope to read a little more about why the two are how they are.

Keep going

You damn man! You never mentioned of an update! CRUEL, CRUEL MAN!

Vey talented writer!

I am in LOVE with this story.

ah that was so... there are no words. they are super cute together. can't wait to read more!

I only have two words for this chapter:

Fucking fuck!

That was amazing (round 1,2... 35, these dudes could get it on forever). The sexual tension was killing me.

Thank god you released us (like releasing the sea monster (giggles in corner)).

I'd review longer, but I'm bushed (just moved into my apartment and I finally have internet access again).

Wweewy!

- Raq

Update like pronto. I can't wait :)

YAY! Talk about relieved tension, yup it's about time. And you did a perfectly beautiful job developing them to this level and getting the characters to this point. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It really does just keep getting better and better. I can't wait for more!

that was haawt.

PLEASE NEW CHAPTER?

Very well written chapter. You captured it perfectly, I think. Really vivid and I'm actually really oddly glad that they had sex. It did get rid of quite some tension.

dontneedyou

i love their relationship ! its so cute and now the sexual tension is gone between them. with both their families there is definitely going to be trouble but i hope they make it through! and for some reason i feel like that girl at the elevator and at the door is going to play a bigger role in the future

I absolutely love this story!

I'm loving this story so far. It has a very interesting storyline so far. Will we meet his family? lol. I can't wait to see what happensnext!

Love this! Characters are excellent! Keep up the great work.

Haha. that was probably the best smut I've ever read. :P