this is a great story! cannot wait for the update :)

This chapter is so cruel! It's been over a year since you updated so i feel like there is no hope you will update, but this story is killing me. I love the way the characters have changed yet they still are trying to hold on to their old self for preservation sake. The end of this chapter is just cruel! i wanna know how it ends! Anywho i appreciate you taking the time to right these amazing words. Your story flows so well from each different point of view. keep up the good writing!

Ohmy. I was wondering if this chapter was actually the last one, until you chucked that Acen-curveball at us. How could you leave it here? That's just...cruel. Although it was pretty satisfying to see Sera standing up for herself, I totally wanna see more steely action between Sera and Acen! And I NEED to find out what happens when Griffith finds out about Acen. I have a feeling his anger will make hell seem a load more pleasurable. :D Can't wait for it

So yeah, I've realised you haven't updated this story in quite awhile, and I'm sure you have very good reasons for that, but as a new fan of your amazing literary skills, I implore you to write another chapter of this. If not now, then soon, or at least before I pull out all my hair in anticipation for some Sera-Griffith sexual tension :3 Over the past week, I've pretty much scoured all your stories. I thought that Brier Wood would be my favourite, but I think this one beats it. Your writing skills really seem to have evolved since that story, and it's really refreshing to see a good author get even better. Also I checked out your deviantart, and YOU ARE AMAZING. I'm always really jealous of people who can either write or draw, and you seem to have both talents. I've gotta say, Fallon's abs made me drool just a tad. Juuust a tad.

Anyway, since it's past midnight where I live, and I've read everything you've posted here, I think I'll go to bed now. Thanks for all these stories, they were really fun to read :]

please please please update more of this story! i need to see the end!

I am seriously blushing. Nice work

I love how your characters are not cliche and that Griffin wants a relationship while Sera is running from one, this is a nice spin from the usual.

I loved this chapter it was gentle, poignant and romantic.

NO! Please there has to be more! I love this story!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT! D: HOW CAN YOU JUST LEAVE ME HANGING WITH SUCH A HUGE CLIFFIE?
Anyway, you're such a wonderful writer. This is only the second work I've read that's been written by you, but they're both so good, and well-written and everything. It's sort of strange though because I think that Acen and Sera's story would have been so cute if he hadn't turned into . . . himself I guess. :/

argh what is this? D:

eek! this story, (like all of your stories) is amazing! Silly little Acen Rivers, you should know better than to mess with the girl you tore to pieces. You'd think guys would learn that...

Read this on AFf, and I think the story is fabulous. You do an amazing job of making your characters relatable (they are cookie cutter and perfect). I know it says you are reformatting this story, just wondering if that means the end will be posted soon? The entrance os Sera's infamous ex at the end leaves me wanting more!

I just found you story and I'm so in love with it. My favorite chapters have of course been these last three, where we find out more about the characters. The way you described Griffin outlining Sera's body in Ch 16 was beautiful. You capture the emotions of the characters so well! Don't leave us with a cliffhanger, keep updating! Please! ( :

I am absolutely enthralled by this story. Completely captivated (ooh, alliteration), it's fantastic. Please update :D cheers.

Hey there! I'm Rosie from A Drop of Romeo where your story has already been added but its review has recently undergone a rewrite! Here it is:

Rosie Thinks: I see this story around fictionpress all the time but I never read it until recently. And let me just say, I hope no one else makes the same mistake as me - read it as soon as possible! I couldn't help but be pulled in from the beginning, especially by the self-reflective allegory at the start. cu-kid writes beautifully and her ideas are gold. This story could've easily fallen into overused cliches but cu-kid keeps it fresh and makes the reader want more and more. The whole story, as a result, is completely original and keeps the reader on his/her toes with all the twists and 's in both Sera and Griffin's POVs, both in third person. I loved how she wrote Griffin - she let the reader into his mind but only gave you hints at his past. Griffin, despite being cynical and a bit cold, has a weakness for helping 'damsels in distress'. He comes across as untouchable at the beginning but the more I read about him, the more I realised just how well-rounded a character he is. Sera is fiercely independent, stubborn and sure of herself, but she is very likeable as a character and her stubbornness isn't chemistry is amazing and I just loved reading about interactions between Sera and Griffin. Their whole relationship just flows and it developed at a perfect pace. The detail and the description throughout the story is consistently of a high standard as cu-kid has a special way with words. This story hooks the reader in and you really do get emotionally involved with the whole thing.