Reviews for Shooting From the Hip
For A Dream chapter 18 . 6/5/2012
*wails* way too short! Want her to reunite with griffin!

I have a lot to ask you though, I'm ridiculously impressed with your writing!

How long does it normally take you to writer a chapter? And how often do you usually update?

Also when you write a story do you have everything planned out? Like you already know what other chapters are needed for this story or are you spontaneous?

Each chapter is so beautifully written. You're great with detail and description! At first I thought it was too much and too slow, but one the story got going it was amazing.

I'm still curious with how you developed all this. The build of their relationship was just right. You notice it but the transformation in their relationship just flows. One minute they were complete strangers and a mystery to each other and now they seem to be the two closest people in the world.

Again amazing build up and development, it was also kind of subtle. Normally you can see there are x chapters in a story; this chapter is where z event happens and move along the relationship this way. But it was harder to pinpoint those events with your story because there was a naturalness to it all.

Okay, I'll stop all the gushing. But when do you plan on updating? I'm super glad I just started your story not long ago. I wouldn't have been able to bear the wait!

Really looking forward to a throw down between griffin and acen! Nice names btw. Also I love how for once it was the guy who's after commitment in a relationship than the girl, such a refreshing touch.
For A Dream chapter 17 . 6/5/2012
These chapters have been perfect! Well worth the wait. I admit it was slow going at first but after a while you just get sucked in!

I admit! I shed a tear or two when he thought she left , it was so nice when she didn't! There this insane surge of giddy happiness in my ches!

You are an amazing terrific writer! Kind of phenomenal!

The only thing I catch onto though is your spelling of lightning. You always spell it lightening which I believe is like brightening instead of the noun.

Other than that, perfect!
Camii chapter 18 . 6/3/2012
Wooaaa! For about 3 years now I have read this story about threehundred and blabla times and I still feel it in my heart when ever Griffin and Sera exchange words or just gaze at each other. I have no word for how involved I get in the storyline and in the characters life when I read your words.

Good writing! Great story! Love it!

Cheers,

Camii
chantellovesya chapter 18 . 6/2/2012
Bloody brillant! I've read the first chapter numerous times. It always turned me off, I usually didn't even get to the part where she meets him, but today out of pure boredom and curiosity I pushed through. Boy am I glad I did. It is truly a moving story. I liked to say that I'm a decent photographer myself, so any story involving photography, sex and Morrissey is a guaranteed gem to me! I thoroughly enjoyed it AND was thoroughly disappointed when I saw you hadn't updated!
Zeah chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
You have me hooked already.

I love how there's a mysterious side to both of them. For once the female lead is just as interesting as the elusive, arrogant male.

Love it!
whisperedcares chapter 18 . 5/9/2012
Okay. Well, alright...Kay, so FIRST: This story deserves so much more attention. Why isn't it at a thousand plus reviews by now?

Second, I would humbly request another chapter written by your obviously wonderful mind/fingers.

Third, I love Griffin and Sera. And I like that her name's Seraphina - not Sara.

Fourth, if that butthole of an ex messes up this lovely pair, I will go fictional and kick his sensitive place. With a pointy heel.

Um yeah. Can't wait for more!

Your New Avid Reader(this story distracted me from finals haha),

~Cara
lionkinglover3 chapter 18 . 4/28/2012
please keep updating i love this story its amazing
rosieroo chapter 18 . 4/18/2012
It's taken me so long to get around to reading this story, and now I don't know why I haven't tried it soon! I loved Brier Wood but I wasn't so sure about this one. Until I read it, that is, and have become hooked! I love all the characters and their backstories. When you first mentioned Acen, I thought he might make an appearance but then dismissed it, so you completely surprised me in this chapter!

I can't wait to see how this affects Sera in the next chapter!
forgottenchangeling chapter 18 . 4/16/2012
It's amazing! I don't know why it took me so long to check out your other stories, but I'm glad I finally did!

Please update soon!
godislove chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
this is REALLY good. [:
CreativeChick233 chapter 18 . 3/24/2012
I always fall in love with your writing. This is the second story of yours I fell in love with, and I can't wait until the next chapter! :)
Paige23 chapter 18 . 3/6/2012
This is lovely, I think its the second time Im reading it. And its fabulous. Really amazing.
blackbirds fly chapter 18 . 3/2/2012
I adore this story. It's so well written and the characters' personalities are portrayed flawlessly. I can't wait to see how the plot continues, so please update soon!
popsicle-stick26 chapter 18 . 2/17/2012
wow loving this story :) update soon please! xxx
VirtuousMuse chapter 18 . 2/3/2012
Absolutely WONDERFUL writing! Your style has just the right amount of descriptive writing, just the right amount of dialogue,etc! Amazing ;D I stayed up for 6 hours readin all 18 chapters! I'm definitely gunna check out your other stories tmrw..you've inspired me to get back in the short story groove haha! Please keep up the awesome work! WOOHOO ;D
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