Reviews for composure
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
silent swish of fans and painted faces

- LOVE this line!
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I admit at times I am displaced

sailboat in the wrong ocean

I really like those lines. and great title- I love when the title isn't just a line in the poem, and actually describes it well. good work.
lymli chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
wow, I can picture the scene, I like the starting.
Mirabella chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Lovely imgery!
your infection their plague chapter 1 . 9/25/2009

Honest, in the manner of

One of those songs you whisper to yourself

All by yourself

It has the anticipation

of a held breath.

Nice work.