Lorri is great ...but I want see more of her...she is so interestingggggggggggg...

Hey,great story but psychopath is not the same as sycophant.

This was super weird! Brent and Lori are massively strange characters, made for interesting reading though.

Hey, I'm here to share some amazing news with you! This story was added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo :)

Here's the Review:

"Helen Thinks: Lost in the middle of nowhere; because seriously, no matter what age they are, men are NOT going to stop and get instructions; Dillon and his friend pull up at rest stop in the middle of nowhere, hoping that the owner will be able to tell them where they are. What they don’t expect is a quirky girl to be working behind the counter. “Jersey's Wild” by Ravina is one of those rare fictionpress stories that is told via the male point of view, specifically Dillon's, and it's written flawlessly. The most amazing part of the story is the realistic angle. The concept of being lost and stopping at the first rest stop you see to ask for directions where you know something weirdly crazy is going to happen – or it has whenever my friends and I have got lost! Lori's added craziness makes the story that much more entertaining and has you smiling along with the characters, even rolling your eyes at times as the males act way too cocky but you know it is how college boys would act when faced with a girl! It's a weird little one shot that will have you smiling for a good while after it's finished!"

Keep writing,

Helen xo

This was hilarious! I love how zany Lori is and Dillions reactions to her. Their interaction was so lighthearted and fun and I think you weaved in the prompt seamlessly. Great job, seriously :)

ahh interesting one-shot! You managed the challenge pretty darn good according to me!

Hahhahaha i'd love for this to be turned into a bigger story or even a collection of memories xD although i think i would get lori overload and the maths in front of me won't get done for tomorrow...anyway, lovely and hilarious wtf-lol story here!:D

Hi, it's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. Your one-shot has been added to the site. Congratulations. :) Here's your raving review:

It is written from a guy's point of view, which is absolutely rare when it comes to one-shots on FP. And Ravina has done it ever-so flawlessly. It's completely real. The craziness of it all makes it entertaining. Overall: a weird, yet cute one-shot.

XOXO,

Juliet

I'm officially addicted to your stories!

i love the craziness(craziness? eh close enough...) its kinda sweet in a very twisted way lol. i liked this part:

"Joe laughed. "Oh, she's taken an interest in you, and that means she won't rest until you give in. Although," he shared a look with his wife, "it doesn't seem like she'll have anything to strain herself over since you look at her like a very sick man looks at cough syrup."

"How?" I asked weakly.

They chortled. "A lot of longing, with a hint of disgust mixed in."

And that just about summed how I felt, so I didn't bother arguing."

see? kinda sweet in a twisted wayD.

feel like making this in2 a full out story? coz i wud definately read it and it wud definately be a favorite...

LMAO LORI'S CRAZY P

I love it! xD

Hehe, another great one-shot. Love Lori's character!

good but still not as good as the others, it was just too short of time

LOL I LOVE IT. xD especially Lori. :3

haha...I love Lori!

And I liked Brent too...he was cool.

and also loved Lori's 'keeping' of Dillon. Cute :)

Ri