lol. Crazy story, nutty girl. Had fun reading it though.

Oh my gosh, that was an extremely crazy story. But yes, definitely entertaining!

Lol, I always did love Lori in Marsupial Summer and I love her even more now. She's so cool. Dillon seems like a great guy too. Too bad Julian and Phoebe aren't in here. I miss them.

This was funny. I like Lori's character. It's sort of refreshing from all those oblivious, innocent characters I love.

A bit weird, but cute

wow, i love how all the challenge items flow together.

amazing :]

Ha ha oh that was great! Definitely a different type of romance one-shot. Loved loved loved the humor. Thanks for making the characters sound so real even if Lori is more surreal than anything else.

I love it! This made me exceedingly happy. Lori's definitely a different sort of girl, but she's a fun sort of crazy. I love how Dillon just seems confused throughout the whole story.

I think I'll need to go read Marsupial Summer now, as I don't think I have yet. Again, thank you for this story! I've never had a story dedicated to me before. :) And this one's too adorable to not love.

-Tin

Lori's character came out better in the previous story than in this one.. (at least that's my opinion..) In fact, Brent took away a lot of the limelight. He's a completely fun chap..

Lori is fun too - except here she seems more random than random. (sigh. i need to find a way to express myself or something :P )

Although, over-all, the story is fun and catchy. Speshlee the Business Cards. Haha.

Sukanya

I love Lori; she's very forward and cool :p I bet her and Dillon would make a very cute couple. She kinda reminds me of Lois in Smallville, but a little bit different; nonetheless I like her style!

This was really good. I especially liked the ending-instead of going on, you cut it off at a reasonable place. Also, I LOLed at the Squawk! I'm cuckoo for cocoa puffs!, due to the amazing randomness. I gotta say, I think the reaction about having a BMW stolen was a little on the gentle side, personally, but that (thankfully) has never happened to me, but I think the anger from Brent/Dillion would have continued, instead of tapering off so quickly. So yes, this could of happened, but it's extremely unlikely :) I don't mind, though! Later! I want updates FAST!

This was really cool. I liked the tone/feel of it. It was just very realistic, very unpredictable, like life is. It was kind of an ordinary event but you made it really interesting. I felt like I was there. I loved it. It was awesome. Keep up the good work! (Haha I felt like a teacher with that last sentence there)

XD PWAHAHAHHAAH.

LOL!

that was so... random.. and hilarious! XD

thanks for the story! :D :D :D

wow nice bro

she sure is one crazy chick

but i like her i hope it had been a little longer and maybe includen julian snd phoebe from the other one it would have been nice

but still pretty good.