Reviews for The Sweetest Candy
Steph3 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Hey,

I really liked it I wish I could write that deeply and well. I can't even write well if I had experienced the story. Anyway, great story loved it!
xxANTONIExx chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
EH?... 18 and 14?... well... that's better than heaps of other relationships I've heard and read of... xD...

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OMG, Aiden's accent was so easy to read because I read so many Gin FFns... xD...

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But getting to the point.

Now that I have read this again, it's made so much more sense to me and therefore, it was much more enjoyable. (Blast my stupid eyeball for hurting that day... Dx...) The feeling I got from it was the sort of fuzzy, lonesome kind of feeling you get when you watch a chickflick... xD... And again, I like the way you describe the mirror scenes. It's not the whole,

"I looked at myself in the mirror. I was wearing this and that. My eyes were this and that colour, etc, etc *vomits*"

Yes, I've read too many facepalm-worthy books... *facepalms*... lucky, this doesn't happen to be one of them. : )

ahahaha, I can't believe you got Tom to read it... I'm writing a few oneshots myself but they're more like drabbles that are worthy of disturbing you into therapy... xP...

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Overall, I can see that you put a lot of effort into this (don't say the whole "I didn't" even if you didn't) and found it quite enjoyable. A lovely slice of cake.

: )
KuroWings chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Nice job, didn't expect the sad ending though. -sadface-

I would like it to keep going and then they will be with each other again or something...I just like happy endings better Lol.

And I was thinking I saw the name Aiden somewhere...Hahaha.

Anyways good job and keep it up? XD

Btw happy birthday.
Kashi chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
You evil, evil child.

Brilliant! BUT SO EVIL! xD

Plot bunney with teeth! EXCELLENT, but oh so cruel hon. I was staring down my screen the whole entire last part, willing the words to mold into something not so heart-wrenching. LOVED the whole story, especially the way you wrote the last part.

FAVOURITE LINE x3

"..afraid the barbarian would King Kong me spontaneously"
Usho chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Oh my god, I LOVE IT. It made my mind play out every word like I was watching a movie, and the end made my heart beat five times faster. It was so cute and amazing, and I'm stunned yet attracted to the twisted end. It's not an impossible end, but it's so real that it makes the whole story feel completely real. I know a lot of people have had the same kind of thing happen to them in a relationship once before, and that made a connection with me and the characters.
Tomm chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Good job... keep up the good work!xD
Teddy chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
"Review: 10 characters"

If I was really to describe how AWESOME this story was, I'd need WAY MORE than just a limited of 10 characters.

Gawsh.. I actually haven't cried in such a long time LOL

It's so god
FireyGoddess chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Omg gabby