Reviews for my blue hurricane
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Love the first and third stanzas. Love love love the nail polish chipping off part. Well written!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
Wow, amazing piece. The whole image of the nail polish was creative. I've definitely never seen it before, and it fit the topic so well.

I also like how you start so many lines with "&." It gives this a feeling of dragging on, and also of the persona's confusion.

Such a powerful piece. I'm sure many readers can relate to the feeling, and you portrayed it in such an interesting way.