|Reviews for Hook, Line, and Sinker|
| Sara chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This just absolutely blew me away. I love how you drew him as arrogant but a little naive. And as odd as it sounds, I love how it backfired on him. It's all so ridiculously bittersweet. And I love the whole bantering, only to know that it was him that needs a good lecturing. Thank you for the wonderful story
| Choukou chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This was very cute. I expected the part where he falls for her, but I was pleasently surprised that she was just messing with him :)
I did catch one error:
"I was fretting over the fact that you didn't dress up for me, that you paid independently for me, that you didn't consider this as a date, that you even pushed my arm off your shoulder."
I think you meant to say 'from' instead of 'for' ('independently from me)
| Why Do I Need A Name chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Oh Please wirte more i will be following you.
Please pretty please!
| theblacksheepinme chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
eh. writer's block happens. can't blame you.
Though the story was good. The girl wasn't your typical hope-he-falls-madly-in-love-with-me-cause-I'm-very-much-into-him type. She's got spunk! :))
| kikolove23 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
I love your story. really good.
| drats chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
loved it. loved the start. the middle. and the end, that was pretty awesome too.
A few small little spelling errors. but you could fix those up after another proofread or whatever.
I also really liked the way you wrote the story, with no names and him talking to her like a letter but it was really his thoughts...
so yeah, awesome. good job.
| little.artist chapter 2 . 3/23/2011
Great plot and wonderful timing in all the scenes, but you have one problem: your tense.
It was okay in the beginning, but toward the end, you started changing words which needed to stay first person.
That's all - sorry about the sequel and good luck with your writing!
| MuffinsRoxSox chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This was amazingly cute. In a...strange and weird way. I absolutely loved the ending. It was so cute. And that same strange-like way. :) Amazing job. :)
| ectodreaming chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
OH EM GEE! AMAZING! XD
| No-Longer-Applicable chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Haha, except for the ending and the physical description of the guy, this is my life story. Except, he really doesn't like me. Anyways, it was well written, and a fun read. Kudos.
| July Tarrant chapter 2 . 11/28/2010
aw, no sequel :( all right then lol. it still was a great story.
| July Tarrant chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
i'm blown away. i love the way you set it up and then switched it around. that was amazing.
| Genato chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Hm.. i understand that maybe you're trying to generalize the story and making it more commonplace or relate-able with you not saying their names but it comes off as a bit impersonal? Also, I really don't feel much guy-ness from the guy's pov. :( But it's a great plot anyways, i just hope you can improve it. ;)
| tarheal03 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
A sequel is absolutely necessary :)
| honey splattered brains chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
GAHAHAHAHA I LOVE HER XDD