This just absolutely blew me away. I love how you drew him as arrogant but a little naive. And as odd as it sounds, I love how it backfired on him. It's all so ridiculously bittersweet. And I love the whole bantering, only to know that it was him that needs a good lecturing. Thank you for the wonderful story

This was very cute. I expected the part where he falls for her, but I was pleasently surprised that she was just messing with him :)

I did catch one error:
"I was fretting over the fact that you didn't dress up for me, that you paid independently for me, that you didn't consider this as a date, that you even pushed my arm off your shoulder."

I think you meant to say 'from' instead of 'for' ('independently from me)

Oh Please wirte more i will be following you.
Please pretty please!

eh. writer's block happens. can't blame you.

Though the story was good. The girl wasn't your typical hope-he-falls-madly-in-love-with-me-cause-I'm-very-much-into-him type. She's got spunk! :))

I love your story. really good.

loved it. loved the start. the middle. and the end, that was pretty awesome too.

A few small little spelling errors. but you could fix those up after another proofread or whatever.

I also really liked the way you wrote the story, with no names and him talking to her like a letter but it was really his thoughts...

so yeah, awesome. good job.

Great plot and wonderful timing in all the scenes, but you have one problem: your tense.

It was okay in the beginning, but toward the end, you started changing words which needed to stay first person.

That's all - sorry about the sequel and good luck with your writing!

This was amazingly cute. In a...strange and weird way. I absolutely loved the ending. It was so cute. And that same strange-like way. :) Amazing job. :)

OH EM GEE! AMAZING! XD

Haha, except for the ending and the physical description of the guy, this is my life story. Except, he really doesn't like me. Anyways, it was well written, and a fun read. Kudos.

aw, no sequel :( all right then lol. it still was a great story.

i'm blown away. i love the way you set it up and then switched it around. that was amazing.

Hm.. i understand that maybe you're trying to generalize the story and making it more commonplace or relate-able with you not saying their names but it comes off as a bit impersonal? Also, I really don't feel much guy-ness from the guy's pov. :( But it's a great plot anyways, i just hope you can improve it. ;)

A sequel is absolutely necessary :)

GAHAHAHAHA I LOVE HER XDD