|Reviews for burning|
| Rhocar chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Sounds like a description of depression, when it is out of control. Great piece
| this-is-silence chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
And then: I LOVED IT:)
I thought you did a great job in combining technicalities with subtle imagery and repetition. Well thought-out from my perspective.
The ending was ON FIRE.
| she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
you have a way of writing i haven't really seen before, like a rant (as you said) but beautiful. i admire it.
| give me november chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
you're writing. i've never read something similar to it. i love when i find a writer here, who is like nothing i've read before. you fit that qualification perfectly, well done!
this was beautiful, and very sincere. i hope to see more from you.
check out some of my own works, i do love support!
| mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
This is so beautiful. I've read it several times and every time I think the same thing. It's like it's curious in a morbid way, and then the ending line hits and you're totally blown away.
"What can an inanimate object do, after all?
And then: ignition."
It's as if you're saying "how can this hurt me? How is it doing it?" and then "I'll hurt it more than it ever hurt me."
Honestly, this is beautiful.