|Reviews for Daydreams and Nightmares|
| RuhFuh chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Are you laughing at shattered porcelain?
| steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
You did a great job here! The short sentences and interrogations are quite effective. They are also well phrased with good descriptions.
'Soon, too soon, you’ve awoken'
Lines like this are just great! It's simple but they fit in nicely and naturally. It adds more to the poem.
I like the flow in this. And I think a little more rhyming would make it even better. But this is good enough for me!
Keep writing! :D