Reviews for The Unexpected Benefits of Bowling |
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![]() ![]() I need to bowling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, I love this story. I'm actually not a fan of the romance genre, but I couldn't stop reading this. I love the way you write! So fluid! And the way you personify the objects. That's genius! Fantastic job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely worth posting :) I love cute oneshots like this. Absolutely wonderful the way the boy doesn't appear till the end. I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, it's sweet, but the pins get a bit boring after a while with repetition. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I just melted from the cuteness... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. Cute, short, and sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is the first time i have fell in love with the lead male character by his hands... and i kind of like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...so going bowling...and so going to try out this new technique of pretending the pins are people I hate :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a really interesting format. I've always admired when authors can work in backstory through something which seems completely irrelevant. I really liked it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! First of all, I just wanted to say that you had me hooked with the concept of the story. It was smart and definitely original. "I am woman, hear me roar." - This line had me giggling because it just really suited the character, and I loved that you didn't give out any names and let the readers use their own imagination. That being said, I think you should have given a littler bit more back story such as during the part where she was flashing back to the meeting she had in the morning. You've told me that she's angry, but I have no idea why and I did want to know how this anger had brought her to the bowling alley in the first place. I really loved your descriptions and the frames transitions were smart and really brought the whole story together. Amazing job with the story! -J. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was ridiculously adorable, and cute, and funny. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() It was worth posting! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! That was funny and cute! Really enjoyed reading it! Too bad it didn't go on longer - although, I don't mind the short and sweet ending. Keep it up! (: ~SnoQueen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, loved it! It's absolutely adorable, and I'm definitely favoriting. Looking forward to reading more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is completely adorable :) I think we've all felt that kind of frustration towards bosses and coworkers. You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere of the bowling experience and I loved the build-up of her interaction with the pin boy. Perfect ending, too. |