Reviews for The Unexpected Benefits of Bowling
redcristal chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Definitely worth posting :)
I love cute oneshots like this. Absolutely wonderful the way the boy doesn't appear till the end. I love it!
dizzydreamer99 chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
I like it, it's sweet, but the pins get a bit boring after a while with repetition.
Exsomnis chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I think I just melted from the cuteness...
Preposterous chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Awww. Cute, short, and sweet.
newone chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
this is the first time i have fell in love with the lead male character by his hands... and i kind of like it
little.artist chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
...so going bowling...and so going to try out this new technique of pretending the pins are people I hate :D
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
That was a really interesting format. I've always admired when authors can work in backstory through something which seems completely irrelevant. I really liked it. :)
glitterxx chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Hi! First of all, I just wanted to say that you had me hooked with the concept of the story. It was smart and definitely original.

"I am woman, hear me roar." - This line had me giggling because it just really suited the character, and I loved that you didn't give out any names and let the readers use their own imagination. That being said, I think you should have given a littler bit more back story such as during the part where she was flashing back to the meeting she had in the morning. You've told me that she's angry, but I have no idea why and I did want to know how this anger had brought her to the bowling alley in the first place.

I really loved your descriptions and the frames transitions were smart and really brought the whole story together. Amazing job with the story!

-J. xx
schradez007 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
That was ridiculously adorable, and cute, and funny. Thank you!
larafrancesca chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
It was worth posting! :)
SnoQueen chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Hahaha! That was funny and cute! Really enjoyed reading it! Too bad it didn't go on longer - although, I don't mind the short and sweet ending.

Keep it up! (:

SnoQueen
Lethe's Oblivion chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Ah, loved it! It's absolutely adorable, and I'm definitely favoriting. Looking forward to reading more from you.
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This is completely adorable :) I think we've all felt that kind of frustration towards bosses and coworkers.

You did an excellent job of creating the atmosphere of the bowling experience and I loved the build-up of her interaction with the pin boy. Perfect ending, too.
CassandraRose526 chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I like this story a lot. It was really cute. Even though there wasn't much dialogue in it, you still managed to capture and keep my attention. I loved how she progressively saw more and more of him until she finally saw the whole of him! The ending was also perfect; you could have dragged it on by showing their game and having some cheesy sap in the process. But instead, you left it open to our interpretation. And bowling . . . def. seems like a great stress reliever!

Cassandra
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
OHMYGOSH.

That was so incredibly sweet that I can't put it into words how sweet it was. It was also really funny.

I love the main character.

She's awesome.

All in all, GREAT one-shot!

Love it!
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