Reviews for The Unexpected Benefits of Bowling
Finwe chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
So cute! I really liked this and I think you did a GREAT JOB! Thankies!
paraNormal chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
cute. not too heavy on the romance, but i like it.
MarieAnn chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
This was definitely worth posting. :-) I love your writing. It seems simple yet it keeps me intrigued and captures my attention!
HideAndGoSeek chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
i was cracking up while reading this! I am definatly glad you posted it!

~*~HGS~*~
AbbySomebody chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Aww, this was really cute! I for one am glad you posted it. I love bowling (seriously, I'm at the alley at least 4 times a week) and you did a great job of describing what its like to bowl. I do that too, I channel all my anger at the pins.

I thought it was unique how this didn't have a lot of dialogue in it, except for the very end. You were still able to convey the 'chemistry' between the pin boy and the A.W.O. (whose name cracked me up). Very good job with this!

-Abby
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