I loved your story, but chapter 11 and then the last chapter..there was a huge gap like it just seemed the story was cut short suddenly..great story other than that! :)

I'm kind of in a hurry here, but I couldn't help myself but review! The whole story was great! I enjoyed reading about Erica and Hayden and I also love Brooke and Brian, they are just so cute! Now, I think the story may have been a little rushed, especially the epilogue, I thought you would put up their time in the mountains and stuff, but you rushed to the proposal. I still enjoyed it though!

Great work!

Keke

Awww this was such a cite story! I loved it! :D

You need more reviews. This cute and cliche. :)

AWH. This story was cute(: I liked it. No drama or anything, it reminded me of a oneshot in 12-chapter form ;)

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*AWH!*

i liked this, most brothers best friend stories have some kinda twist whereas this 1 is... well it just makes u feel good. nothing 2 complicated, just sweet n nice;).

AWW! XDXD I love it! XD

I'm sad it's the last ch but it was an awesome way to end it. XD

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Awesome story. I'm upset that the next ch is the last one though. It really is a Great story! XD

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Its Awesome. I'm sad it's almost over though.

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AWW! That so sweet! Dang it Hayden, why didn't you have the guts to tell her! Ugh! Guys r so confusing! I mean they act all tough but can't tell ANYONE their feelings!

*Sigh* O well, I'll never understand em.

Anyway, epicness! XD

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Aww! Old people are awesome! XD!

Love it! XD

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AWW! Sorry short review. I really wanna go to the next ch! XD Trust me this is an AWESOME story! XD

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Another awesome ch! Sorry u had a 7 hour shift. That sucks. This is REALLY good. XD

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Ugh! Why didn't she answer the phone!

Love it though. Awesomelyepic story! XD

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