She just gave both her bro and Hayden an awesome idea. Perfect. Anyway, Love the story! XD as I said before, it's epic!

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No! You do NOT walk home after what happened! NO! And Wake up! Hayden dose like u and u like him back! Ok. Now I'm yelling ure charrie. hehe. Sorry. Epic story though! XD

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EPIC STORY! I'm not done yet, in fact I'm only on ch 2 but it's still epic! XD

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Awesome ch! Can't wait for the rest of the story! XD

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okay, so i really like your story. though, the whole jordan trying to rape her on the first day seems a little unrealistic. i still like your story though and i will keep reading. :)

The scene where Hayden and Erica are at the gazebo reminded me of a scene from A Cinderella Story ( starring Hilary Duff and Chad Micheal Murry ).

I like it a lot. Wish I read it before.

Wait a second, did he wait 9 years to have sex with her?

Your story was great. I'll find someone like him,too ;)

i loved this..

I really love this so far! It has lots of detail and good grammar. I love brothers best friends stories. This one is really good too. I can't wait to read more of clueless

Katie

definitely sweet!

That story was absolutely adorable! I especially love the final two chapters, the way their childhood connects to their present relationship. Great job D

yes. it's short and sweet.

i'm so sad it's over.

Oh.. sweet story. I love Hayden. :)

hahahh, so cheesy but a perfect fit.