Reviews for rinse
RentBoheme chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
This is my favorite poem of yours you have showed me so far.

As the person before me said, this is a brilliant line:

"I can't sink into you

the way you effortlessly pour into me."

Great job.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
"I can't sink into you

the way you effortless pour into me." -Amazing lines!

I love the whole subject matter of this whole piece and I'm sure many can relate to it. Wonderfully written :)

P.S. Thank you for the review!