|Reviews for Intelligence|
| Rocky Swordleaf chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
UPDATE! this could turn into an interesting story. however, as i have a pet rat and a pet mouse, please forgive me for criticizing your interpretation of them. mice are nervous and jumpy and also only live one to two years, so even if nicias was one of those unusual rodents who lives well over their lifespan, he would be extremely old after three years. rats, on the other hand, are actually friendlier and tamer (mine lets me stick my finger in his mouth and NEVER bites), not to mention they are far more intelligent than mice. sorry for my lecture on rodents, but as an animal lover and the owner of sixteen pets, i just had to get that off my chest. i understand that your interpretations are critical to the plot. dont change or delete this awesome story just because someone said it was unrealistic. after all, this is FICTION.