|Reviews for One Last Note|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13
NOOO! Why?! THE MOTHER! HIS MOTHER! WHY WOULD?!
Plus. Why'd you stop? Why do you do this to me?
| Round About Parker chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
I'm really liking this so far... Nick is definitely an interesting character- the redneck issue is a good change from just "geek." I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
| Hell's first Icicle chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
one thing confused me though. if he's just receiving the news, how has he seen it "too many times"?
| BandDaid chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
Nice update! i dont have an account so didnt review before.
looks like the mom wants to commit suicide...and is that a sneak hint in dave's past?
| BLUEtime chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
AWW thats so sad he gets picked on so much! and all b/c he lives in a trailer?
I like the way you write its very pretty and descriptive! faves!
| MissWish chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Another great story! Your second installment, eh, well i BET IT'S GOOD AS ALWAYS. I love the characterization and just the whole plot. There's a little something in it that stands out. I can tell this is going to be something worth reading.
| bUnnyHoleerabit chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Wow...what losers those jocks. and lol porcupine that was a funny simile! I really liked this. good job.
| no-man chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
this was really enjoyable. i luv the character dave i thinkk he's sp real and nice. the other kids are so messed up, gosh red neck? RED NECK? who says taht ne more?
| firestar267 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
yes. he does need somebody. and i would quite like hippie boy to be that somebody :P
this looks really promising cant wiat for more!
| LeMaki chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I like it, especially the ending.