Reviews for there's a wind on the way
Isca chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
"There's a storm on the horizon." Nice use of pathetic fallacy. :)
Blood on Ice chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Oh my God, I so liked your poem. The last two lines... Wow. You're good.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Welcome back to fictionpress. I've missed your poems, and I'm glad you've posted more for me to read. I really, really like this piece. The metaphors are unique without being incomprehensible, and the flow and the imagery is wonderful. I love the last two lines. The whole piece is gorgeous but those just tie it up so perfectly, the contrast of weak and wonderful but at the same time I can relate to the feeling you are describing. Great work. Keep writing!