Reviews for The Forest Clearing
Estelin chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
this was actually really great. keep up the good work and writing.
Mynthia Fae chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Interesting twist at the end. Im very impressed. It's a shame this was not written into a long story with a developed plot line. I like it nonetheless. very nice.
Sukina-chan chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
I do like this. Not because of the sex, but because it has a hidden meaning you don't quite understand until the end, which mnakes it all the most desireable.

One tip for improvement, though, it would be wise to stop using so many "she", "her", "he" and "she"'s, try to describe the story without them, like an opposite point of view.

Otherwise it's very good. :)