ooh! caught red-handed!

i just hope all goes well for Claire, and I'd have to say that some little brothers are pretty darn useful!

nice way how the story's turning out! keep up the great work!

Very nice story so far. Just found the address for it on fictionpress. I hope to read more soon.

hi

great story you got here

let's say im friends with simbafan and constantly write back and forth on youtube

He'll tell you about me

my Youtube name is Sgz50 (I'll get into personal details in private)

Great story!

Ooh...she's heading into dangerous territory! The mind allows us to do strange and potentially dangerous things to keep our minds off of misery...let's hope she stays safe...

How would you like a review? _ I just started this account here, and what better way to start off than with a review for one of my favorite authors?

Quite a mysterious beginning...And intense as well. Can't wait to see the next chapter up!